again

Its been a long time, And theres alot on my mind, Things i wanna find, Allways wanna hide, Just one more try, But i dont understand why? This is too much, I cant seem to do enough, Well thats lust, Nah thats love, When u cant give up, So u gotta calm down, Still gotta tick around, Y all the fuss, Damn wheres the trust, You try too yell, but hush, Ill do whatever i can to just see u blush, Loving u is a must, Till i turn to dust, Hearts gonna bust from loving u too much, Got 3 scars on it, One died the other 2 stomped on it, So i drink to forget and forgive, Cause its hard to forgive and forget, Tired and sick, Girl im sick and tired, U be acting wild, Kinda like a child, U kno other girls want me, But i want u, so get em off me, I dont care if im a softy, These b*****s just a lil salty, And my relationships are kinda faulty, Maybe thats y they allways haunt me, Like a tragedy, a catastrophe, Y u stay mad at me, Im allways here, Showing u i care, It aint fair, But oh-well, only time will tell, cause days and dates constantly change, u suffered the pain, walked through the rain, but life has a way, to show love can still feel the same

Reviews

[gombeggar]

certainly needs an edit for all the punctuation and capitalization errors and such...but the words within have good merit

[MandaBear]

this is a sweet and very interesting write =)