just leave me there

really stressed and kinda confused well this is what i cme up with in like ten mins thanks for the reviews everyone it helps to kno that others understand or just feel what you say some times anyway..

Now ive been writing, 

been trying,

been fighting,

been crying,

but im still learning,

still earning,

still tearing, fearing

whats gonna happen,

so im rapping , snapping

my fingers to a beat 

sounds pretty neat

i may only be sixteen

but there is so much ive seen 

feels like no one cares bout me

wish i could leave 

everybody, just let me be

they say a child is better heard than seen

sounds pretty damn mean to me

but they dont care, 

i guess life just ain't fair

so when i die just leave me there....

Reviews

[Mike Emil]

relieve yourself of the rapping it only hinders your work show me some real writing

[gombeggar]

well, that frustration doesn't clear up as time goes on...good freestyle...keep writing

[Morrigan Nicole]

The last line felt like a slap in the face, very Crude... or raw. But your right, life isn't fair, its just fairer than death, that's all.