Bored

All this time gone to waste
Wish I could up and leave this place
But I must stay
Live day by day
Wish there was a better way

So I'm walking down the road
Don't know exactly where it goes
But I'm riding down the road
I do everything on my own
Cuz that's the way I was grown
Turn on the radio, turn off the phone
And I'm driving down the road

Get home
And I'm all alone
Spending my time
Writing a new rhyme
Cuz this stress clouds my mind
I try to be nice, try to be kind
Try to share, try to care
But life just ain't fair

Now I'm not perfect
But I do my best
Things that I regret
Keep me from rest
All the people I protect
Just left.... so what's next?

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

This is the first piece where I cannot pick a line nor a stanza to be my favorite above another. I am forced to ask you to keep sending me read requests. And I'm giving it 100/100.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like how it flows. I suppose a lot of us feel this way from time to time . . .

This is really great. I hope that I can see more posts like this from you. I love the simple ABAB Pattern and your rhymes are solid. As for the message, I believe we have all felt that at one point or other, and u captured this feeling well. Great job.

[gombeggar]

very distracted and tense

[MandaBear]

I know how you feel! Great poem! 100%