Fear

The souls of the weak

All drop down in shame

The innocent die

What the freak?

Who's to blame?

Who's to cry?

 

Who deserves this life

so filled with pain

Who should say "Put down that knife!"

And who's to blame for all the dried bloodstains?

 

This fear eats at me

At a furious pace

Who am I to deserve this fate

Why cant they see

How everything that takes place

And how it will all translate.

Into the great fee

of this stupid empathy.

 

 

Author's Note

Again a 1 minute poem... so obviously it sucks so give me your honest opinion

Reviews

[Sharkapillar]

Doesn't suck. It's a vent, a rant, an emotional and flowing stream of consciousness. If you give a s**t, I've got a bunch posted somewhere on this cluttered site.

It's very emotional, and it's beautiful simply because you conveyed what you were feeling perfectly in your words. Excellent job my friend.

~Rabbit