Dead inside

A very simple poem, very simple rhyme scheme, hope you like it.

You ripped out my heart

Left me lying in shame.

I hate to admit this part

I loved how you came

Into my life

 

Heartbroke this boy

From every tear shed again

I feel so much like a toy

So broke and in pain

 

 

Even though i show a smile

Inside I am lost

You only lasted for a while

And oh what to my cost

I lost again

 

Thought that you loved me

Oh how I did.

So broken now

I feel like im dead.

So Dead Inside

My hearts not beating

My eyes are still silently bleeding

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Author's Note

Know it kinda sucks... wrote it in like 1 minute... pure emotion

Reviews

[morningstar]

really deep poem. i can actually relate to this alot so i really like it

[2Real2BTrue]

That doesn't suck- it flows, rhymes, sounds good. It's deep, but not so much that I don't know what the hell you're talking about. It sounds like you write from experiance. (And I write most of my poems in a minute, too- nothin' wrong that).