Cold

May the sun ray enter my heart

Fill it with heat and delight

Bring back the joy

Fade away the fog and destroy

The ice inside of me

Melt it away..let me see

The light again

Let me be..myself again

Let it shine inside of me

Like a star of dawn

Shining so bright

A cold mystery upright

Melt down those frozen hands

Bring back life.. let them burn.. with thy love chants

Smile again…sad moon

Reviews

[Jack...]

Once again, your words enchant me. I have read and re-read your work trying to pinpoint the exact term to use to describe your style and I have decided it is "warm". Warm is the way your words affect me. Warm, like a spring day. Warm, like a favorite woolen blanket. Warm, like a genuine smile. It is the warmth of your writings, even in a poem such as this titled, "Cold" that melts my heart. Very well done, Dalia.

Please, smile again, sad moon.

[Dalia]

your description of my simple words made me smile at once...I never thought my words would have an effect on anyone other than myself, but knowing that it does, gives them even more value than ever.

Thank you Jack :)

[Jack...]

You are welcome

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very sweet and tender poem...
filled my heart with contentment with its lullaby kind of effect...

awesome poem :)

[Dalia]

thanks again my friend
kind of you to say so
always live to read your comments :)

[Ohhhwillow]

This is very elegant. To whom you are addressing I was unsure, but without a doubt your ability to use imagery is exceptional. :)

[Dalia]

I was addressing a friend that I was missing as well as myself :)
thank you Willow I appreciate your kind review

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Dalia, nice piece portraying the cold empty feeling of being loveless.

[Dalia]

thanks John.

[Night]

Awe...sooooo sweet. I love this poem, beautiful and elegant...wonderfully done...=)

[Dalia]

your kind review means a lot, really, thanks c:

[Annabelle Lee]

this was exceptional.

[Dalia]

happy to know you think so Annabelle :)

[David Scott]

Reads like a chant... I like the way it ends. Smile...

[Dalia]

am glad you liked it David :)

[Holly Mason]

this is very lovely
really thank you for sharing

[Dalia]

Thank you my friend.

[Monster ^.^]

Awwww, such a warm poem, ironic to what it is narrator is talking about! I just love it! The sun will give you its hug soon enough! :))

[Dalia]

thank you Monster c:
glad you liked it
and i hope so soon ^^

[Monster ^.^]

Oh, it would be soon enough! The universe doesn't give us problems we can't handle ;)

[Dalia]

that I agree with my friend, all what happens is destined, all what needs of us is patience and hope, as hard as it seems in reality, it simply goes on.

[Monster ^.^]

:)

[Frieda P]

This write could apply to most anything/anyone, I like it's versatility, has many translations included within it.....I'm with you on the 'cold' bring back the love chants of warmth to my heart.

'Smile again...sad moon'

Nice one!

[Dalia]

thank you so much Frieda, am glad it was you who made the first review, I love to know what you think of my writes.
glad you liked it :)

[Frieda P]

I did, it warmed my heart :-)

[Dalia]

your words had the same effect ^_^