Me VS my heart

Me VS my heart

A Poem by Dalia
"

another quarrel with the heart

"

Now I've got to step on my heart....
And squeeze really hard....
For your love to go out....no other reason I have...there is no doubt...
For the love to step aside....
And keep my heart left behind.....
.
Lost again....
Looking for care, passion, sympathy....
Everywhere....anywhere...
My heart pleads to me...
Am so weak..save me....
Its not your first...nor your last...
My fooled heart...endure it..and gather your scattered parts.....
.
.
There is no use....
You have no excuse...
You're so afraid....it's love...here I said....
Oh my dear heart....finally I learned to sane....
I don't want you broken again....
You've chosen this?
So don't blame me...for the plague I'll bring on....
Because its not yet done....
And the rain is still to come

© 2013 Dalia


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Hauntingly beautiful. To speak to the heart, wonderful.

Oh my dear heart....finally I learned to sane....
I don't want you broken again....

Beautiful, simply lovely. You do not cease to amaze me with your fragrant flow of words and phrases. I am enchanted.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

12 Years Ago

you always fill my heart with joy with your kind reviews
thank you so much :)



Reviews

Hauntingly beautiful. To speak to the heart, wonderful.

Oh my dear heart....finally I learned to sane....
I don't want you broken again....

Beautiful, simply lovely. You do not cease to amaze me with your fragrant flow of words and phrases. I am enchanted.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

12 Years Ago

you always fill my heart with joy with your kind reviews
thank you so much :)
It's a good approach to separate the main character and her heart! In fact, we see exactly the turmoil between the emotions and the mind! That was excellent! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dalia

12 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, glad you like it :)
Monster ^.^

12 Years Ago

It is because it's very understandable... simple yet complete :)

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