For Long

For long…

Of living in this world…….

Fighting within this human mold ……

I choose to sail in wilderness……..

Why speechless!!

I find speech useless……

Words meaningless……

People all alike……faces all the same…..

So I darn to loneliness……..

Weirdest little girl……

so shy and quiet like a pearl……

Roaming in wonderland…….

Building castles of sand……

Don't wake up my sanity…….

Don't bring me back to reality…..

As I gaze up to the sky………

Bewildered as I fall in love …..

And believe …. the blue lie…….

For long….

Despair in my eyes I see…….

Sorrow in my voice I hear……..

But not for long…..

It will be……

Till the bird falls………

Of the sky and be……another victim of dreams vanity….

Reviews

[. - .]

Wow the third paragraph is wayyyyyyyyyy beyond amazing. It's like epicly freaking amazing.
Beautifully written :")

[Dalia]

thanks my friend :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Dalia, not sure I get the ...........?
Running away from life in solitude is often a reaction to being unable tonavigate the coplex tides of life. Well described.

[Dalia]

thanks John.
about the ......, well that's how I write on paper and even when I type, it maybe a kind of gathering up some scattered ideas all along, maybe, do you believe I should stop using it in poems?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes unless it indicates a pause it is irrelevant

[Dalia]

well, I'll take that into consideration indeed, thank you for the note John.

[Purplerose]

Beautiful images you have brought forward. Enjoyed. :)

[Dalia]

Thank you Purplerose

[Purplerose]

Well.....when i start bringing other poems here, please don't think I am coping yours. Lol! We do write a like. :)

[Dalia]

lol! no my friend I won't
but it seems like e must arrange writing a co-poem :)

[Pax]

another victim of dreams vanity
~ i think most people go through this, just depends on how they/we handle each dreamy wonderings....
very nice poem!

[Dalia]

Agree :)
thanks pax

[Summer]

All the ......

is distracting, but it's still very good.

[Dalia]

Thanks Summer
may I possibly know why do you think its distracting?

[Summer]

We all pause naturally when reading poetry the ........
not needed I think.

[Dalia]

I get your point Summer, am a new writer and that's how I write even on paper, I guess it's more than a pause for me, I guess it's more like linking up ideas.
However I'll take your note in consideration, thank you :)

[Summer]

Just a suggestion, you don't have to follow my lead.

[Dalia]

I know my friend :)

[Holly Mason]

very nicely written thank you

[Dalia]

thanks for reading and reviewing
glad you like it

[Lonesome Traveler]

This really speaks to me, the first two stanzas just seem so true and relatable. "I choose to sail in wilderness" - A beautiful line. It seems to also breeze along dreamily, it's lovely.

[Dalia]

thank you for your wonderful words my friend, its my honor :)

[Sami Khalil]

Weirdest little girl……



so shy and quiet like a pearl……



Roaming in wonderland…….



Building castles of sand……



Don't wake up my sanity…….



Don't bring me back to reality…..



As I gaze up to the sky………



Bewildered as I fall in love …..



And believe …. the blue lie…….
My faves in this very nice poem...:)

[Dalia]

Glad you like it Sami
always love to see your reviews :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)

[Jack...]

Dreams, a blend of truth and fantasy and ours alone to rejoice in. This poem was beautiful with a sincere and affectionate feel, oh to be lost within the mind of this child, so shy and quiet like a pearl, perhaps this is every dream.

[Dalia]

am ever so humbled you think so of my writings Jack, thank you :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For long indeed, a guiding piecce that almost threatens the reader to finish, well done, good read.

[Dalia]

thank you my friend
am honored :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome