My heart beats

It always beats, rarely with a rhythm

My heart beats
takes away my night sleep....and keeps
My eyes wide open.....it steals
My smile and open a gate to my bleeds

My heart beats.....

So annoying it becomes
With undecided feelings it drums
With fantasies and dreams it overwhelms

My heart beats....
So fast I can't calm it down
Or act....like I can adapt.....
Like I can feel OK.....
Like I can act cool......how cruel!
The way I lie to you my heart...
When a volcano is inside..and I cast you aside.....

But don't blame me.....
For the smile I'll fake.....
Don't beat so fast.....it's not my mistake.....

You beat so fast....you want out
You want to let go....I know
So break down the chain.....
And alive goes my feelings again.....

Reviews

[Jack...]

This poem has a heart beat all its own as its rhthym is oh so smooth and fluid. Very nice.

[Dalia]

thanks Jack, your reviews are somehow special to me.
I appreciate your kind words, thank you :)

[Purplerose]

Wow! Love this. Can relate to this. :)

[Dalia]

Glad you did :)

[Deron Alexis]

well said loved the pattern the flow the scheme the words you used well put together

[Dalia]

thank you my friend :)

[Lonesome Traveler]

You're welcome :)

[Deron Alexis]

XD

[Dalia]

^^ :P

[Deron Alexis]

isn't that a way to get noticed ima try that after i read some of that guy's work

[Dalia]

yeah it is, creative ;)
he is a good writer as well
am honored to know all of you guys :)

[Lonesome Traveler]

Oooops! Sorry, I don't know how that managed to get there!!

[Dalia]

hhhhhhh that's O.K my dear friend am always glad to find you in my poems reviews, any where any time you are more than welcome :)

[Deron Alexis]

lol or so he says XD

[Dalia]

XD you are so funny Deron

[Lonesome Traveler]

I say my bodies not in sync with my brain, thats what :P

[Dalia]

and that's not so bad Lonesome traveler, me too :P

[Deron Alexis]

me 3

[Dalia]

XD XD

[Night]

ahh my friend...the heart of love, the heart of a poet resides in you....I liked it...well done.=)

[Dalia]

your words are a great honor to me
Thank you Night am glad you think so :)

[Night]

...I do, and you're very welcome.=)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For someone whose first languge is not English this is so good.

[Dalia]

Am really glad to hear that !
It does gives me a push forward, thank you .

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

I always loved this one, greet structure

[Dalia]

good to know, thanks :)