Can't take this

in a minute of overwhelming weakness

I have to take this.....
why do I have to take this?
a slap after another....
each stronger than the other....
I take it with a weary look....

a teary eye....and a broken heart.....
something I can't change....
a mere destiny of mine.....
I can't escape....nor fade....

I'm used to this.......that's how I console myself......
Am used to my sadness......weakness.......darkness......
but this......this one......tore me down.....
broke my silly heart down......
my dreams have deceived me.....
washed my mind and drove me to insanity.......

I swear ..
I saw it coming....
I swear I knew this would happen.....
I said it before and I say it once more....
sing it every night with a sad tone.....
I'll teach my heart to harden.....
I'll train my soul to burden....
but no use after all....
I got shocked.....though prepared....
How ......and why.....can I take this......

Reviews

[Jack...]

No one should be used to sadness, weakness, darkness. No one should know very well the pain of a mistreated heart. No one should fall prey to those who hurt. Take flight, little dove, find the skies clear and wide open for you to escape this dilema. Fly until you find a haven of happines, for you so truly deserve it. very nice.

[Dalia]

I read this review more than once.
I believe in it, I love it, I wish I can bring your lovely words to life.
Thank you Jack.

[Jack...]

Just smile Dalia, for that shall be my reward.

[Dalia]

:)
I already smile each time I read your kind words
:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You write with a passion and with crafting you will write some lovely poems. 'condole' is a spelling error, console.

[Dalia]

Am very honored you think so Mr.John , I hope I will.
Thanks for clarifying that mistake to me

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nice one again...i'd read out ur's all poem's......ur's writing style is too match with my writing style....(i mean ..............)this dotted style.) .. i also write in such a way.........
here in ur's this poem i'd loved too many lines............. like'''.......
"I CAN'T ESCAPE........NOR FADE,"
I'LL TRAIN MY SOUL TO BURDEN........"
MY DREAM'S HAVE DECEIVED ME........"
I'LL TEACH MY HEART TO HARDEN.........."
really u r nice writter.........may b one day u'll.........
any way i liked + loved = enjoyed totally..........95.7/100...
carry -on...........
have a nice day............
may god bless u..................

[Dalia]

Thank you again , am honored you are reading my poems, and yes I have this style of "dotting" to catch up with my ideas I guess
Always like to hear your opinion :)

[.]

ahh...thank's...i appreciate ur's word's....yeah this is really a nice way to write...if u make a look on my writing'ss more then u'd see there...that i love that dotted style....even u r the one that write as my way.....i really appreciate it........

[Dalia]

of course I'll read your poems and tell you what I think ..

[.]

ok.....have a nice reading....!!