I feel

How I feel ?

used to feel good...
most of the time...
felt bad.....felt sick.....

sometimes felt love.......

from every river ......
I sipped a little.....
lingered in between each feeling......
had the experience......

now it seems over..........
like my session is over........
like I said I had enough.......
when I hadn't even started.......
it seems to be finished.........

now I feel....nothing........
no sadness ....enough....like it should be........
no happiness.......the true one.........
even love ......seems
so far from reach........

now I'm neutral......
now I feel nothing......

 

 

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

This poem is certainly lavished with sadness, we have all felt numb, though depression is a sloppy slope.. Be careful not to dwell in the past and enter a sphere of self loathing and sympathy of which no one is able to pull you from. Only you can make the change! Well done here however, I love your use of the word "sipping", in context it is extremely modest, certainly a highlight of this write. Keep going!

[Dalia]

thank you, I appreciate your kind words a lot :)

[Jack...]

Listening but not hearing, looking but not seeing, locked inside, in the dark, in the loneliness, where I can be me...alone. Somewhat sad, somewhat hopefull but definitely well written.

[Dalia]

Your review is another even better poem I feel :)
thank you I am ever so humble

[Jack...]

Please understand, you are a wonderful poetress

[Dalia]

:3
I'll try to believe so, but since a wonderful writer said so, then let it be :)

[Tarry Franck]

I can relate to this at times - you did an excellent job portraying these feelings, these words. Fantastic write :) Sad but a good write.

[Dalia]

thank you Tarry for your lovely words
am honored :)

[Tarry Franck]

My Pleasure

[BryanaBear]

Don't let the numbness take over, once it does the emotions are hard to find again.
ON A POSITIVE NOTE: Great Piece, You can feel the emotion and I think it is nicely written.

[Dalia]

Thanks Bryana I'll take your advice for sure :)
glad you like it

[Angela ☄️]

it sounds as if the person speaking in this poem is numb, almost lost in a trance as he speaks these words. But I love how it is written, it helps me understand the value of it all. :)

[Dalia]

At the minute of writing , yes, you're right
Glad you loved it Seraphim :)

[Angela ☄️]

Haha, I love all poems dear. :) I hope your writings become positive though.

[Dalia]

I hope so too, wish me luck ;)

[sue]

sad and with emotion. Next poem will be you picked yourself up and the energy and positive emotions will come back to you

[Dalia]

I hope so Sue :)
Thanks I hope you like it, it was my first poem in English

[khalid]

sweet times are always short, they are fast to finish while we never get enough. this is what all people feel and that is why they always say..life is hard..just try to take it easy

[Dalia]

The hardest times as well the times when our souls are very high are the times that inspire us the most, to write, draw or express ourselves.
I will , thanks Khalid

[.]

so smoothness is here......i really liked it much.......i loved ur's preety word;s too....the writing style is totally awesome ....i'm glad to read such kind of poem...i really did like......88.4/100...
have a nice day..!!

[Dalia]

Thank you so much , am really glad you like it :)

[.]

ahh.....it's ok...don't mention....even i'm really glad to read it out........there's so smoothness in ur's word's.......it's my really a great pleasure that i'd read such sort of poetry........even i've gained /seen/read something new in a very smooth manner...ur package is totally awesome...the tittle is perfectly based on ur's word's....i liked + loved that............anyway.....
have a nice-day.......

[Dalia]

thank you ,, am ever so humbled ,, by the way this is the first poem that I ever write in English, so its quite special to me too .. thanks again .. have a wonderful day

[.]

wow........is that one ur's first poem....then i should have to give a pat on ur' back....this is really well written......now u should've to carry on.....with ur's writing.....go on........may god gift u a very nice + successive path.......great job u' did here.......even at the first time.....

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Quite sensational indeed!
Well penned and deep!

[Dalia]

thanks..
This is my first poem you know :) a special one