Blackhole

Blackhole

A Poem by Dalebear

Nothing but a black hole

Just surrounded by darkness

Nowhere to go or hide

Empty with no feelings

Just filled by my own paranoid thoughts

Lonely in one dimension

Lost in time

The feeling of depression 

© 2011 Dalebear


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May be short, may be concise but it is written well.. We all have these feelings every once in a while but jumping outside the hole into the light... that shows our character, our drive. Great writing sir.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Perfectly written Dalebear well done my little bear!

love

mamabear xxxxxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2011
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Dalebear
Dalebear

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