Damage

I thought you was different your just like the rest

Like the f**k do you know what best?

Why do you people keep hurting me?

Is it because you’re too blind to see

Well guess what I hate your guts

No I not taking no more buts

You are an evil person and sick

I just want one day I matter to you not just a bit

Do you know the damage you have done?

You leave me and my gf alone and my son

F**k off you’re not my friend

How can this make a mends

All my heart has gone to shatter

But like you don’t even matter

I thought you cared but you don’t

So eat these words and choke

This is I had enough

You broke me down to every last bit of fluff

So this is my goodbye

Reviews

[paul]

great title. poem written with great rhythm

[compositionc]

This was very...emotional. A harsh goodbye. Stern almost. The rhyming is there and in some places it seems like of awkward or forced.
I did like the poem though.

[mamabear]

One big kick a*s poem Dalebear
I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo glad I don't live in Canada!!!!!!
I hope you two sort it all out.

Its good to get all your feelings out, congratulations Dalebear!!!!!!!

Love, as always,

Mamabear xxxxxxx