Death Seed

Why do 2 people  destroy a child's heart?

How you both poisoned my heart with you poisonous dart

How you ripped it out to the ground

How you stomped in to the floor with every pound

All your hate did I really need

You made my heart bleed

You made me and then planted your evil seed

Reviews

[paul]

excellent title. amazing ending

[Cynthia]

how sad!
Verty touching, strong write

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. oh, dear dale ... i know your pain ... but do you know the best part about evil ? ... it doesn't spread through seeds ... and it's so weak that it can be defeated by a golden soul like yours ... you will never be like them ... even if you try, you cannot be like them ... and that, in fact, is the first part of their punishment ... losing someone as precious and as magical as you ... and knowing ... that they failed in making you be bad ... because you're angelic and nothing, not even satan himself can change that ... and not only that ... you're also a genius artist and poet ... this is a beautifully written poem ... very, very powerful ...