Journey

Life is a journey of a ride

You will laugh and you will cry

You will get hurt along the way

Feel different feelings each day

Meet new people that you love

That you come close like to turtle doves

You will have bad days and good days to

But most of all some people like  for you for you

 

 

Reviews

[em]

- my oh my, dale!!! - that - right there - is a lesson in life for real - and in wisdom - you're so right - pain and hurt - they're a product of living - because we live and breathe and feel - we hurt - there are some dark patches - filled with evil people and thoughts - but there are many well lit ones too - filled with blossoms and love and family and peace - and those are the times - that make all those hard, bleeding footsteps worth it -
- you're a bright, bright, young man, dear one - at just 14 - you're a shining light - bless you!!! -

[.]

. em and paul are so right ... so right ... so right ... this is an absolutely remarkable poem ... at 14 ... you have understood this journey called life and expressed it in words like a wise wizard ... every word you say is totally true ... and we all love you for being you ... that is so true ... absolutely tremendous poetry, dale ... beautiful, wise and perfect ... you are a rare and unique genius, mister genius ... :) ...

[paul]

excellent. this poem expresses real wisdom and maturity