Heart

Heart

A Story by Dalebear

A heart can feel all emotions

Empty

Loneliness

Fear

Happiness

Pain

Sadness

Fear

the best feeling is LOVE

© 2010 Dalebear


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- oh yes - a heart can feel all of those - but love - that's the best of all - it surpasses all the emptiness and loneliness and fear and pain - love it is - that makes us strong enough - to go out and conquer - love shows us trust and faith - it makes us overcome our fear - you're so wise - so spectacular - your words are brilliant - and you are a profound poet - i'm so proud of you - and so amazed at your wisdom!!! -

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. absolutely ... and i so agree with em and paul ... you are completely correct ... poetically precise ... wonderfully wise ... and this poem is very unique ... and extremely perfect ... just like you ... and i think i absolutely love how you said it in such few words ... and even presented this lovely poem so beautifully ... amazing work, mister genius ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


brilliant


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So beautiful!

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yess! soo sooo true! Love can surpass all those other ugly emotions. thanks for this reminder. keep writing, great poetry!

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- oh yes - a heart can feel all of those - but love - that's the best of all - it surpasses all the emptiness and loneliness and fear and pain - love it is - that makes us strong enough - to go out and conquer - love shows us trust and faith - it makes us overcome our fear - you're so wise - so spectacular - your words are brilliant - and you are a profound poet - i'm so proud of you - and so amazed at your wisdom!!! -

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