Deserted Island

I feel abandoned and deserted island that far far away

Where the mood of the weather always is dull and grey

The place in my heart is always alone

Where no one knows where is it because this place is unknown

This lonely person is unloved

Because people destroyed it pulled and shoved

This place makes me feel forgotten

So I stay here to get rotten 

Reviews

[.]

it's horrible
it's terrible
and it feels like hell
i can always tell

it's a shooting pain
a biting chill
the worst frost bite
and a trudge uphill

it's a weight on the heart
squashed and smashed and burning
like a piercing dart
that was shoved and kept turning

there's just one word that can get one out
and that one word is respect
but people create a doubt
and that's just so suspect

i hope for a beautiful island for you
an island where you can blossom and flourish
an island so perfect and true
that you have no thoughts of wanting to perish

we have to go on bravely
no matter what happens to us
it's just something we have to do
without creating a fuss

life indeed is a precious gift
it's like the stars in the sky
these grey clouds will drift
and it'll be time for a bright yellow flutter by

we'll have much to smile about
and much to feel happy about too
things will just be a lot better
and i'm not just saying this to you

i mean it with my heart and soul
and you know i truly do
we have to have one solid goal
to keep us from feeling blue

[Angel Bird]

An abysmally deep write, which gives a strongly touching insight into a badly wounded soul.
It is very well done and has a good rhyme.

Just let it all out and let your soul breathe through your pen or your keyboard. Words have magical healing powers...

[em]

the eye's on the goal
with holes in our soul
it's just never easy
the feeling's always queasy

if only they saw
that every wound is raw
if only they knew
just how blue is blue

they'd possibly understand
that courage is our brand
we trudge the terrain everyday
and in blackness we find our way

chin up and head held high
getting through, not getting by
looking for our paradise
and yes, yellow flutter bys!