Monster Biological Mum

Monster Biological Mum

A Poem by Dalebear

How could you  follow him I was your baby boy

But what you went along with made it destroy

Why did you let him hurt me that was out of order?

You was just possessed with his evil disorder

You joined every torture he gave

He turned his crap to make you his b***h slave

You didn’t care about my pain

How many times you knew he was insane

You blocked out all my screams

Wake up women this is abuse not some horrible dreams

How you still gave me to your evil man

You kept following every twisted plan

But let me tell you something now

Table have turned you horrible cow

How you  got cancer that made you sick

That made you die really quick

But how I cried and cried on that day

Now I can only pray

So I say R.I.P

Because you’re away from that nasty beast

 

© 2010 Dalebear


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. oh my god ... you have such fine understanding of everything ... and such rare sensitivity ... it is natural for a little boy to expect his mother to protect him ... and such a colossal let down when she doesn't ... we can never know what's going on in the minds of people and why they turn abusive ... it's not a natural instinct to be abusive ... and one certainly doesn't expect it from parents ... you had to suffer a lot ... people you trusted let you down ... people i've trusted have let me down too ... but you've got to fight it out ... and sit it out ... like a true warrior ... and you're doing a fine job of it ... by writing such powerful poetry and expressing your feelings ... and then expressive yourself through your magically perfect art work too ... brilliant poem, dale ... simply outstanding ... very, very powerful ... and i can only join you and say RIP ...

lots and lots and lots of love to you,
serah

Posted 14 Years Ago


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- this makes the insides churn, dale - the suffering is so wrong! - so so so wrong what she did! - when all she should have done - is protect you - and be there for you - and love you - endlessly -
and yet - you - are an incredibly sensitive person - and yes - despite what she did - RIP - like serah - is all i say to her -
your talent is astounding - your spirit is inspirational - your heart is pure gold - your art is diamond - you courage is mammoth! you are just the best, dale! you are!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. oh my god ... you have such fine understanding of everything ... and such rare sensitivity ... it is natural for a little boy to expect his mother to protect him ... and such a colossal let down when she doesn't ... we can never know what's going on in the minds of people and why they turn abusive ... it's not a natural instinct to be abusive ... and one certainly doesn't expect it from parents ... you had to suffer a lot ... people you trusted let you down ... people i've trusted have let me down too ... but you've got to fight it out ... and sit it out ... like a true warrior ... and you're doing a fine job of it ... by writing such powerful poetry and expressing your feelings ... and then expressive yourself through your magically perfect art work too ... brilliant poem, dale ... simply outstanding ... very, very powerful ... and i can only join you and say RIP ...

lots and lots and lots of love to you,
serah

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 20, 2010
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