Creative Minds

This poem been done by Serah my friend and Me a Dalebear

be brave, be brave

be brave my child

the situation is grave

but we'll make it mild

we have to try

to not cry

my eyes are hurting so badly from the crying

i want to stop and keep on trying

four days of crying was like hell

you know the pain, you can tell

we have to fight it out 

it helps if you shout 

the pain will not go 

but we got to fight with the flow 

then the pain dies down so we can still grow 

you are absolutely right

you have power and might

when the pain is out of sight

we'll go and fly a colourful kite

as the kite flies

no more cries

we feel amazed and dazed

when we get this feeling it hit a crazed

 

then we'll go dancing

and get a tattoo too

and pain will stop glancing

when we go boogie woogie woo

we can gig away

tap our feet and sway

then we feel magical too

so we can do the tap a roo

and then there'll be no more tears

just laughter and a lot of fun

we'll have no more fears

fears will see us and run

Reviews

[em]

wow - when two poets as talented as the both of you - two of my favorite poets in the whole wide world - collaborate - there is magic!!! this is such a spellbinding tale of life - it captures all the pain and darkness - and all the courage and spirit - all the resilience of the warrior and all the warrior's struggles -
i'm moved - speechless - you're just the bestest bear in the whole wide world! and your auntie serah - she's the bestest too!

[deeps]

Oh! This is wonderful such a wonderful collab you have created. This is pure magical. Enjoyed this well written write.

[hmm]

then we'll go dancing
and get a tattoo too

These lines just really caught my eye. I liked this it pulled me in. Written very well.

[.]

You are very talented indeed. Your words just flow down the page. You rrhyming is perfect, right on spot. I like this alot.

[.]

. it's an ABSOLUTE HONOUR to share this space with you MY SUPREMELY TALENTED FRIEND ... you wrote THE BESTEST LINES ... and you came up with the AWESOMEST TITLE ... you came to my rescue in my hour of sadness and together we made something that is a dream come true ... it is a wonderful dream, my GENIUS FRIEND, to be able to write with you ... IT IS AN HONOUR AND A PRIVILEGE ... that i cannot define in words ... YOU ARE THE BRIGHTEST STAR IN MY SKY ... and anyone can read this ... IF THEY WANT TO KNOW WHY ... you're the awesomest, YOUR AWESOMENESS ... :D ... :D ... :D ...

millions of chocolate bars of love,
serah