Dying Heart

How could you do this?

But you just couldn’t resist

How much pain do I need?

My tears was my only plead

Still you stab me with that knife

But who cares it just my life

All your words made me feel bad

It didn’t matter if I was sad

Look of all my heart strain

Makes it harder to breathe with pain

Yet I give you some of my trust

But you blew it away like dust

You made me feel sour and bitter

I can’t feel anymore shitter

You didn’t care if I cried

My heart dying inside

My poor heart you destroyed

Yet it didn’t come to your mind to avoid

I been through enough hurt

Yet it only dale so push him in dirt

It only my heart you broke

The pain that bad it has to choke

I cry tears of blood

Which the tears will flood

Watch me break and fall apart

Look this broken heart

Too late to say sorry those lie

My heart has gone to die

How I want to pull it out with wire

Then toss it in the flaming fire

So here I die of a broken heart

What made you think it clever and smart?

 

Reviews

[em]

oh - not clever and smart - not at all - just plain evil black - the pain in the heart - but what a punch here you pack - your light will blind their eyes - your glory will be their pyre - no matter how anyone tries - they cannot kill your sparkling fire!!!

[luciddreamer]

This emotional write pulls at my heart and makes my soul ache that their is so much abuse in this world......
Peace

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Wow this is so sad but yet so pwerful and so full of emotion.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Dalebear,

This flowed very well, and you pulled me into the emotion. You have been through a lot of pain and your soul is soiled in the dirt and grime of terrible people, just know you can cleanse yourself, and make something out of nothing.

Regards,

Matthew

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. oh, this is so heart-breaking, dale ... makes my heart ache and ache and ache ... i really will never understand why people hurt people ... i never will ... and as you know, this is how i'm feeling too :( ... when something so painful happens ... all we warriors can do ... like you say ... is fight it out and sit it out ... and with love ... build our hearts again ... when love has so much power, i don't know why people talk in rage ... i don't know what they are so angry about ... you are a genius and a golden hearted boy ... anyone who doubts your love is making a BIG, BIG MISTAKE ... this is a beautifully written poem ... sheer genius ... so powerful ... it's so important to let it all out in poetry ... let no one ever stop you from loving or writing ... you have a mighty warrior poet's heart and a mighty warrior poet's pen ... with lots and lots and lots and lots of love ... aunt serah ...