Real Nightmare

This is to tell you what you did and destroyed

How I was too young to avoid

How you broke and twisted my heart

You shredded my soul apart

How you hit me with a brutal force

You had no remorse

I had nowhere to run or hide

Feeling of despair which made me cried

No matter what I had no choice

You even took away my voice

All over this house is dark

How you kicked and hit me and left every single mark

Look at you full of evil black

If I cried I would get a hard smack

How you pushed and pulled me out of control

Don’t do this demon dad is your role

This is your son’s life

But look you what you doing and your wife

You both have thought this through

The words you said made me feel like pooh

I’m scared of the demons which you really are

But this has gone too far

How you watch me breakdown and fall

Knocked my esteem to make me look like 2 inches tall

I took all your torment

Every single day which I have spent

All the abuse and swearing you did

Which god forbids

Please can someone save me?

Before I set myself free

I am dying of loss of hope

So know I grab and use the rope

Too late I slipped on the soap

  

Reviews

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WOW! This one sure takes a hold of you. Very well written, amazing flow and rhyme scheme as well.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Dalebear,

I do like the fast pace, I love the suffering dripping from every single word, and I enjoy the fact you are pouring your emotions on the page. But....slipping on soup....that's just dangerous.

Regards,

Matthew

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. so, mister genius ... you popped another awesome poem, eh? ... i'm glad you expressed these feelings ... it is your right ... as many times as you wish ... with as much intensity as you wish ... when you get it all out ... you'll fight it all out ... you gotta do what you gotta do ... just a few more years ... and a little more art ... and you know who is going to feel two inches tall ... very powerful work, your awesomeness ... (but don't you dare slip on the soap or go anywhere near a rope else those evil people will win and a warrior can't let that happen, can he?) ...

[emmah]

oh - and they're listening - to every single word - every word - every work of art - every single time you shine - and boy do you shine - they'll writhe in pain - they'll never breathe easy - they'll forever rot in hell - look how much - how brutally they hurt you! - there's no getting rid of this pain - there's just the brave fight - the brave fight that you put up - like serah says - like the real mighty warrior you are - and when the world's gleaming with your light - very soon it will - they'll be blinded and burnt -
you're truly the best, dalebear! the bravest, mightiest warrior are you!