The Pain You Caused

The Pain You Caused

A Poem by Dalebear

I felt helpless and exposed

I felt isolated and closed

You pulled me apart like a delicate rose

I took all you kicks and blows

You two was thoughtless to think

You made me disappear and sink

You ripped me up and pulled me apart

None of you had a heart

I listened to every single lie

All this abuse I felt I was going to die

Everyday from now on I cry and scream all night

With the trauma I get with all this fright

But I realise you didn’t care

 Now this just isn’t fair

Because you didn’t think of my need

When you kicked me you left me to bleed

 

© 2010 Dalebear


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they may have taken your magic
and made your life very tragic
but they don't know what's coming
because when you shine, they'll be running

your sadness is burning inside and i understand
oh this sadness - it was so unplanned
it keeps coming and waking you up from sleep
oh how it makes you feel you want to weep

and each and every day you wipe your tears on your own
oh, the seeds of sadness they have mercilessly sown
but this sadness has made a warrior poet and artist out of you
and you're gonna create magic from this pain so blue

and when there are millions whose tears you wipe away
oh those devils will be speechless and left to pray
but no one's gonna answer their prayers
because they are the worst evil slayers

you are a warrior of the soul and more
there's a lot for you in store
just a few more years and you will teach them a lesson
and they will need to make an honest confession

and that will be their ultimate punishment
to know that they caused your torment
and the pain that they will then feel
they'll just go down on their knees and kneel

and say oh you master warrior of might
we're sorry we hurt your light
we're evil and the worst of all
we're sorry for making you small

and i just can't wait for that day
when justice will come your way
and then a new life will begin
a life without their sin

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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- oh - i so agree with serah - in hell they should burn - the evil ones - they have no place in this world - they should be fried for every scar they ever gave your body and soul - and they will - they will find their hell - right here on the earth.

you are a real hero - and your spirit - it gives strength to so many - how many lives you've touched and will touch in the years to come - and how by sharing your courage and your story - you make others brave - give them the hope and the courage they need - inspire them- inspire us - the warrior inside all of us - to emerge stronger from the depths of the darkest dark - is truly remarkable. YOU ARE A REAL HERO, dale!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very sad tale you tell, and it's terrible how cruel and un usual some people can be. Good write, I do hope you are in a better place.

With Love,

Jaidyn

Posted 14 Years Ago


so sad. people can be so cruel. powerful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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...
they may have taken your magic
and made your life very tragic
but they don't know what's coming
because when you shine, they'll be running

your sadness is burning inside and i understand
oh this sadness - it was so unplanned
it keeps coming and waking you up from sleep
oh how it makes you feel you want to weep

and each and every day you wipe your tears on your own
oh, the seeds of sadness they have mercilessly sown
but this sadness has made a warrior poet and artist out of you
and you're gonna create magic from this pain so blue

and when there are millions whose tears you wipe away
oh those devils will be speechless and left to pray
but no one's gonna answer their prayers
because they are the worst evil slayers

you are a warrior of the soul and more
there's a lot for you in store
just a few more years and you will teach them a lesson
and they will need to make an honest confession

and that will be their ultimate punishment
to know that they caused your torment
and the pain that they will then feel
they'll just go down on their knees and kneel

and say oh you master warrior of might
we're sorry we hurt your light
we're evil and the worst of all
we're sorry for making you small

and i just can't wait for that day
when justice will come your way
and then a new life will begin
a life without their sin

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 17, 2010
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