Me and my polar bears

I’m a polar bear and my name is Dale

I do have a cute and stumpy tail

I live and roam and live in a country called Norway

I get up early to start my day

I like to swim the region’s seas

Don’t worry my fur wont let me freeze

I am a very good strong swimmer

The reflection from the snow makes my white fur shimmer

I have large front paws to help me paddle

I walk in the snow like it is  a waddle

 I float on sheets of ice to get to my destination

That floats around my nation

I have a thick coat of insulated fur

                               Try and catch and hunt me of you dare    

I have fur end of my paws too

Which is only a few

So I have a good grip on the ice

So I don’t need to tread it twice

But under my fur I have black skin

Plus the climate air is really thin

My black skins help me soak in the rays

So I can sit and relax and Bathe

I am a powerful predator to catch my meal

It is the yummy seal

I am a master of my surroundings

Apart if I slip under the ice then I be drowning

I have no natural foe

All that about me and my polar bears you know

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

This is truly lovely. Great imagery - cute but wild.

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how cute! Polar bears are lovely although I wouldn't like to meet one!

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. oh my goodness ... that's the most detailed ... and beautifully written ... polar bear poem i've ever read ... and i'm thinking ... deep down ... i think i'm a polar bear too ... though i don't think i'd be able to hunt those yummy seals ... and do you know that i love this entire poem but my favourite line is "i have no natural foe" ... and you are indeed the master of your surroundings ...

you are indeed the master of your surroundings
and of about this there can be no doubt
you know all the beginnings and endings
and you know what's in and what's out

your words flow like angels from a heavenly pen
and they rhyme and dance on my screen
i think if i just count all the way to ten
you'll become eighteen from thirteen

just a few more years, just a few more years
and then the tears will stop flowing
you will conquer all your nasty fears
and your words and art will be glowing

. p.s. ... i hope you spoke to your caregiver ... someone really must be guiding you, my lovely friend, and help you build your art collection and your poetry collection ... am waiting to write to them ... :) ...

[emmah]

oh wow, dale!!!! that brought me a huge smile!!! and love this bear dale!! i learnt so much too!! your rhyming is awesome, your knowledge of polar bears is incredible - and your poetry is so pure, so sweet - it amazes!!!

you're truly the best genius gem artist spectacular poet polar bear cub ever!!!