My Granddad

My Granddad had some whiskers

They are very very white

They reach down to his tummy

It such a funny sight

They getting longer everyday

He really doesn’t care

When my granddad sneezes

Ah ah ah ah cho

The fly up in the air

Reviews

[Inci 2]

haha!!

[luciddreamer]

This one made me laugh, thanks for the peaceful moment :)
Peace
Robin

[emmah]

oh how lovely!!! there's a picture in motion in your words!!! what a sparkling talent you are!!! *smiles smiles smiles*

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. hahahaha! ... lol ... :D ... i can almost imagine his whiskers flying in the air ... must be quite a sight ... you write so amazingly well ... :) ...

[mamabear]

WOW! How one is sooooooooooooooooooooo funny. You are very very talented. You have really made me laugh. Thank you for putting a smile on my face, I have really needed it tonight! I am so proud of you baby boy.

[paul]

brilliant poem. you're very gifted