This special person

This special person

A Poem by Dalebear

She means the whole world to me
She makes me feel like I'm free
My heart beat's way to fast
I got a feeling for love at last
She makes me smile when I'm upset
I'm happy are hearts have meet
She my light in the dark
I feel in the end fireworks spark

© 2010 Dalebear


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really sweet..im glad i can still feel that way :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh dalebear!!! what a beautiful and pure love song!!! it made me want to fall in love too!!! that feeling must be so awesome!!! for her to make you feel free!!! amazing!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. oh, that's a beautiful feeling ... i'm in love too ... and that feeling keeps my days bright and beautiful ... you rhyme words amazingly well ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on September 30, 2010
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