Why

Why

A Poem by Dalebear

What bedevilled you to hurt a small child?
You just drank a lot that sent you wild
Days went past you was too drunk to realise
You just filled my head with lies
The only way to get the sadness out was to cut
All the scars and my body specially my gut
My warm heart that turn to glass then broke
It didn’t care to you that what I thought
So the answer is you ruined my life
So the only option if now my knife

© 2010 Dalebear


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. oh, i know this pain ... glad you wrote about it ... gives me the opportunity to share with you ... that i have been through many kinds of abuse ... self-destruction is not an option or ever should be ... build on what you have ... construct ... and flourish ... btw ... your profile picture is one of the cutest pictures i have ever seen ... :) ...

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its very brave for you to write this - very, very brave - you've a strong guy, i can tell - when we go through abuse - it makes us feel less like ourselves - and more like the abuse - but we rise - we take small steps - we fight every single day - we have good and bad days - ups and downs - but we fight the bad days even more strongly than other days - and we have friends who understand - who listen - and they help us see clearly - just how special we are - one day at a time!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice One :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so powerful dalebear! Its well written, its brilliant. Well done dalebear. I am very proud of you. It takes guts to write this and put it online! Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. oh, i know this pain ... glad you wrote about it ... gives me the opportunity to share with you ... that i have been through many kinds of abuse ... self-destruction is not an option or ever should be ... build on what you have ... construct ... and flourish ... btw ... your profile picture is one of the cutest pictures i have ever seen ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on September 30, 2010
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