Deep Inner Pain

The tears are endless


More days go on make me feel less


My life one big mess


I can’t fight any more stress


My mind stupid and thoughtless


Their too much pressure on my skull


Makes me brainless dead and dull


Look at my sad face


Depression back on the case


So this little hurt boy cries


Now my soul and heart dies


Why did you not care?


Now I feel like I got wear and tear


No one ever hears me scream


I wish it was just a bad dream


You think I’m just a mental nut


Because I need to cut


I feel so numb and dry


So let this be my farewell good bye


I can’t live no more with this disease

So ill cut and leave me here to die and bleed

Reviews

[paul]

Depression back on the case - great line !
really great rhyming
excellent writing

[mamabear]

You have a beautiful life ahead of you baby. All you have to do is reach out for it, its yours for the taking baby! You just have to have faith in yourself and faith in me.

[Alicia™]

This is such a beautiful, haunting, and sad poem…

Hang in there, and don't give up!

[...]

. no, no, no ... you've got to stop ... and then you've got to find others who you need to stop ... take on more pain ... that of others ... will definitely make you feel better ... that is your purpose ... you have seen this pain so that you may survive it and enable others to survive it ... no more cutting now ... it's hereby banned ...