A state of being

You made me weak then

you made me strong

determined to prove you wrong

from all those slanderous words that went swirling through my head

until I wished I were dead; I became strong.

 

Everyday I went to bed knowing I'd grow even more and,

each time I prayed I just asked for another day

so I could grow even more.

 

Sweet revenge became my song;

I will go on

I can't wait to roar.

 

Enough of your terrifying reign

it's way to much of a strain

I'm ready for my life to begin again.

 

Progression takes time though and...

so I continue to try to push on

until the day comes when I move on

deciet and lust sway you like a virgin in love.

 

I watched all my dreams die at your call

now all I know is regret and memories of sudden death.

 

forceful feelings of revenge I push out of my head

not wanting the devil to be feed.

I think forgiveness instead.

 

re-cognant fear of your next fit

where thunderous bliss is truly missed

I want to dismiss, regroup, navaigate through

changing routes and missing you. 

 

Author's Note

this is a poem from my up coming novel A HEART FELT EMOTION tell me what you think of the dialogue and flow. peace

Reviews

[AK]

I like this piece, I really like the message. Women in this country need to take control of their lives and stand strong.
Tough love... All the typos really distract from the strength of the piece.