SAKE
A Chapter by Dale
When we met there was something about him that interested me, the way he approached me I knew he was well seasoned with women. I was walking down the street and he came up from behind, he said "it's cold out here, but you look hot"!
He continued, excuse me as I kept walking I was about to enter the bank and I felt him very lightly touching my elbow, it was electrifying again saying excuse me but I have to ask you... I stopped and turned around my mind worndering what it might be. As I face him now I see a very handsome man -- my eyes move up and down taking him in and stopping at his face as he's smiling almost laughing. I wonder what has him so amused. I say, yes? Pausing, he's still smiling just staring down at me now. Looking back I say, ask me what? He says you look good! as if he were surprised, I laughed and turned my head back and forth.
He said No! I don't usually do this but I was just on my way to pay my phone bill when I saw you and I had to come over and tell you, how beautiful you look. I started to turn around saying thank you and he said wait can I ask what type of work you do? I'm a technician for Sony and I happen to know where their looking for new talent. I said oh, come on, not the old I can make you a star routine. He stopped smiling, I continued I thought you'd say something more interesting (in my mind I was disappointed) after such a great opening line. He just laughed a cocky kind of laugh.
Oh no, you'll find I'm far from routine -- I just want to know you, maybe we can go to lunch or something tomorrow. Can I call you? Can I give you my number and you call me? Yes! He interrupts No! I'd feel more comfortable if you would give me your number because then I know I'll talk to you again, he went on to say, I'm not letting you get away; do you always wear your hair like that? What kind of perfume are wearing? You smell good! I'm smiling now as I say I don't give out my number, I'll take your number though -- I'll call! He said reluctantly, okay, you got a pen? With a look of dissapointment he began writing it down he says you can give me your number I won't harass you, I know you have a man huh? Don't worry I'm not like that if you don't want me to call anymore after we talk than just tell me and I won't call anymore. Who knows, maybe I won't want to talk to you anymore after I get to know you. I'm laughing out loud now, as he smiles satisfied.
We exchange numbers! Looking at the piece of paper, it read Ravel and a number. I say Ravel? He said yes, I say different. He looked down at the piece he'd torn off, Climentine? That's your name?! I just look at him stern, he says it fits you. As we begin to part he says -- oh by the way, Climentine, looking up at him once again, he had a look of sincerity. He bent over coming closer to me, now right up in my face he says, I can make you a star if I put my mind to it. He was looking me dead in the eyes over his glasses. It was captivating he had great eyes.
© 2008 Dale
Author's Note
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What do you think of the exchange? are the charaters real to you?
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Added on July 22, 2008
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DaleBrooklyn, NY
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I am a Brooklyn native, mother and wife. My alter ego is a writer and she is successful at it. I love writing living through my imagings i currently have two books published my latest being A WOMAN .. more..
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