one night many years ago

Black dog

darkness all around...
an angelic voice flowed from the microphone
then the lights kicked on
and she was standing there
the luscious black beauty
she had a stride about her that just made me scream
she would turn me down
like all the others around and before her
but i cant keep away i needed her.
The scene faded into memory
she burned herself into my eyes
into my mind
my heart needed her
it burned as I turned
dreaming of that night
that one night that I acted
on instinct
on pure feeling for in my heart.
My heart was wrong
I had been nothing to her
she took me for all
and took me for a fool
that beauty
with a stride of a goddess
was truly a soulless beast from hell
even if she showed me a 'good time'.
This one hard night
changed my life
her heartlessness
had led me to another
beautiful woman
not just in the body that I sought after
but in the soul she had
both on and off the dance floor.

Reviews

[Helpless]

nice! pretty cool!

[shoaib]

yah theres something attention grabbing about a girl that can sing
i feel ya there
nice work here and visual imagery ... well done