Tears and Fears

a few lines on getting over heartbreaks...

Some things are great,

Some things aren’t meant to be.

Your thoughts are muddled,

Close your eyes for a second and you’ll clearly see.

 

You’ve hurt someone;

There are times when you lied.

Someone has hurt you,

There are times when you cried.

 

Everything happens for a reason,

At least that’s what they say.

Though I could bring you sunshine,

But all I gave you were gloomy clouds of grey.

 

I know you’re torn but,

You’ll never feel love till the heart feels pain.

I know you’re dazed but,

You’ll never think straight till the brain goes insane.

 

Now I know you still got some life in you,

So wipe your tear and live it now.

Forget the fears that you had,

You’ll find some way, somehow…

Reviews

[Firemay]

That poem is gorgeous. I recently went through a break up and i can really find myself in your piece.
If i might just add that i think it could be better if the flow was better. The lines that some are really long and some are really short somehow make it a bit hard to read and feel the emotion within it. Hope this helped.

[Dalai Thapa]

Thanks a ton for the feedback. I am glad that it felt relatable and I'll keep it in mind to improve the flow.