Eyes hiding...

Eyes hiding...

A Poem by Dakshta

Eyes hiding secrets, never open again..

© 2013 Dakshta


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Dakshta
What do you think? :)

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sometimes few words can deliver a powerful statement

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

True.. thanks for the review :)
Short and powerful thought...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Beautiful, is what I think :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
well, what's that..lol :P ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Well then that's the best review ever :)
Rahul

11 Years Ago

Really....?

Reeally......?

Reeeeaaaalllyyyy.......?

Reaaaalll.. read more
Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Yes.. !

Yes.. !

Yes.. !

Yeeeeeeesssssssss! ;)
Never have I known such few words that have such impact. Simplistic beauty. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Big fan of minimalist style, I thought this was excellent, says so much in so little.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
Secrets are best let out! So they must remain open! :P Nice thinking, BTW :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I only want to see TRUTH in someone's eyes ... If there lies and lis then it should better be kept close :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dakshta

11 Years Ago

Kept close :) Thanks for the review :)
Divyanshu Kachhap

11 Years Ago

sorry for the mistake

(*if there lies any lie)
Dakshta

11 Years Ago

:)
Returning the love for your review ^.^

I love this one. Sometimes, the simplest sentences can show the world a whole lot more and leave the world wondering what else you have to say. Really good job on this! Keep writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I hate those kind of eyes who hide secrets in them ;)
Eyes says too much if they want to ;)
very short yet superb :)
Keep writing !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

yes sometimes we can ,,,lol :D
Dakshta

11 Years Ago

:)
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

;)

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Added on May 15, 2013
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Dakshta
Dakshta

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