A book called life...

To be frank I think in each one of our life comes that one day when we get fed up with everything... We just want to burn those painful pages of our life...we just want to close our eyes and want this miserable time to just end...

But then who likes a story that has ended just in the beginning....No matter what happenes, we have to complete our story....we have to complete a book...

A Book called Life...

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Walking their bare feet on the beach..

with the sky full of stars,

with the wind whispering something in my ears...

Watching the waves,

I read the pages of my life...

Tears were written on some,

and on some was anger..

On some there was hate,

on some was written fear...

On every page was used the same ink,

black was it's colour...

I looked at the stars above

with tears in my eyes..

I came here so that I could burn this book called life,

so that I could burn it's lifeless pages...

With a sigh I looked back at the waves,

it felt like someone was calling me..

I looked around but the beach was still

and then I realized that it was the wind,

it wanted me to look back at the book...

I was confused but looked at it anyways,

I smiled when I realized what the wind wanted to say...

In the book there were still many blank pages,

still waiting for the ink to colour them...

Now I understand what the wind was trying to tell me...

It was telling that,

so what if Black ink was used in the past...

The world is so colourfull,

pick your own colours

and colour those empty pages yourself...

I smiled at the book and thanked the wind..

With that I ran back to the world,

to pick my own colours...

To write my own story

and make A Book called Life more Beautiful...

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I know I know I suck in poem writing but I got this idea and my mind put me on the gun point to write it down and post it.....sooooo ummmm yuP what do u think? :)

Reviews

[Nightfall]

what do i think...you've got what you wanted to get...!!that's what i think...

A book called life, that can't b hide,
where's my sight, i wanna ask it from the wind that comes every night,
comes every-night, makes me bright,
touches my face & makes my lips shine,
i wanna go high, but which path is right,
you've got one heart, think from their tonight.....

i wanna smile, but where's my right,
where's my right, that's why i wanna smile....

winds touched me as from the height,
i go on the top every day + night,
i don't wanna b hide, because Dakshta...has got her life...

you've got your life...!!wanna you go for a ride,
I think, you'd like to go on a long'~Drive,
i'll give take ya for a date every night,
but firstly i gotta earn much money's site...lol...

I did love your this first writing,
then why you're waiting,
go with it & do next writing's planing....

Dakshta, is a pretty women, i'm not her hi-men,
she knows her aim, & me too wanna alots of fame...

may i ask...Is "Dakshta" your real name..?
i think it's a quite diff, name,
anyway, what's your aim...?
i love to live with books + paper & pen....


Are yu a student, if may i ask...?
i think you do your every hard~task,
forget about the past,
omg...i've an appetite...i wanna eat breakfast .....lol..


"A book called life" is indeedly very nice,
i'm telling ya twice, because i read it out a thrice,
i loved yur working way, i think you're too spice... (sorry),
hey...i think you're a girl, having alots of shy,
omg...again i've an appetite, i love to eat slice......


One day, you'll too an awesome writer,
i'm not your well-wisher, but a frnder,
hey...did ya see a movie of harry-porter,
Dakshta is a pretty Author.....


Hey....may i ask, from where you did get the idea to write....?
i hope you dont' wanna hide,
i liked yu writing style,
wanna you go for a ride....

anyway, you're a good writer,
hey...i'm not a phython...lol
you've got a talent of Your father or mother,
coz...you're daughter of (hey...not mine...) of you mother....


hey...i wanna you touch (sorry),
i hope you ain't belong from the species of Dutch....lol...
because, i liked + loved = did enjoy your work much...

[Dakshta]

Haha that was awesome! And yes Dakshta is my real name, student? Umm yes n no. I did saw Harry potter.....
And no I do not belong to species of Dutch... lol...

Anyways, thanks so much for such lovely review :)

[Nightfall]

gotcha...but may i ask...Is that you on your walla pic.........lol ?
or is that any kinda trick, do ya see channel pogo & nick,
i'm well, & i do hope you're tooo well, not sick,
i really loved your writing Ink...!!

[Dakshta]

Well it's good that you are doing well and yes I'm well too :)
And yes that is me in that pic, cute aren't I?.... lol..... Thanks so much for liking my writing :) And about pogo & nick, well I don't watch them now :)

[Nightfall]

lol....is that ya in ppic....may i ask ...where's your neck...?hahahahLOL

[Dakshta]

Haha it's under my head! :D

[Nightfall]

All ones under their head, but i think you're special, you neck is on the fire....lol
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Dakshta]

um no it's not, it's on the egg smarty... look closer to the pic :)

[Nightfall]

omg...you're an egg........lolololololoooooooooooollll :))))))))0

[Dakshta]

What?! Noooooo, I'm not an egg! I meant I came out of an egg :)

[Nightfall]

Oppps......i think you eyes've already been blind.....:)))))))))
hey...may i ask your species....?what kinda organism you're...?lololololl

[Dakshta]

Hey! I'm not blind! And by the way my species is very very rare and we are called "Awesomers" :p

[Nightfall]

Awesomers..." Is that all funnny Amiga...!! :)))))))))))
anyway, gotcha your way....wanna tell one my way....
your this species ain't a well, 'but in real you 're damn very well,
you know how to protect your shell, because you know the worth of hell...

Dakshta's species's alike Awesomers,
i think you'reonself a charmer,
hey...don't dare...lol...wait..i'm not your home's farmer lol...
beucause, i'm your frnd & you're my frnder...i meant 'defender"..lol....

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

I love this!!! It makes you really think about life, and whaty it has in store for each and everyone. Very well written, Dakshta:)

[Dakshta]

Thanks Maggie! I'm glad you liked it :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

:)

[Pankaj Lohia]

its a nice poem.. just one thing... you've written I readed the pages of my life... it should be "read"? ... but an optimistic poem :) i like it

[Dakshta]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :) Oh and thanks for the tip too, I changed that readed to read :)

[Pankaj Lohia]

btw ur writings dont look like ur 16.. theyre mature :)

[Dakshta]

Really? Why so?

[Pankaj Lohia]

I mean u write really well for your age :)

[Dakshta]

Thanks :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

It's great, I mean really. Good work

[Dakshta]

Thanks :)

[EverleafOwl]

Very beautiful! Wonderful job on descriptions! ^^ LOVE the idea, too.... X)

[Dakshta]

Aww thanx so much :)

[EverleafOwl]

You're welcome, brilliant person! :D

[Dakshta]

Haha thanks again! :)

[EverleafOwl]

:D welcome!