Locked Away

This is a fav poem of mine by living_shadowz

Impossible to open.
Can only dream to find a key.
A door without even a handle, there is no chance.
A glimpse of the outside world is forbidden
I am never to be seen, secluded, Locked away.

There is no escape, only regrets.
Regrets that a decision like this was made, was chosen.
A maze with a sealed away exit, lost forever.
Lost in the dark.
There is no left, there is no right.
Only thoughts can be of comfort.
Lock them away never to be seen.
Do not share them, for the darkness you are inside of prevents you from trust.
Do not share.
Do not share.

Reviews

[Adi Holt]

nice short, sharp poem. The sense of claustrophobia and constriction comes across really well, this is how I interpreted it anyway. Avoiding flowery language was the right choice, it makes it stronger.

[Curtis.Lenker]

Good job here. I know what its like to feel secluded and unnoticed. Its not a pretty feeling. The message is clear I enjoyed this poem a lot. Amazing work.

[Daisy_Petals]

Thank you so much!