SOLITUDE

Nowhere is where I sit...
None but the universe is lost...

But the inevitable always persists,
For what cannot tear us, transforms us.

Author's Note

This is just a two-set couplet.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

The universe is always changing, and us with it so we never exactly sit in the same place from moment to moment. This reminds me of a bee. Here’s an inspired gift poem which you may keep as your own:

Bee

Where I am
isn’t where I was
as I scram,
move about, and buzz.

[Peter H]

hmmmmm i don't have much words for this excellent short attempt :)

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Nirego]

It's only when alone that we can truly focus on the challenges that face us and only by ourselves can we be inadvertently changed through our experiences or deliberately resolve to adapt and overcome.

Such power in so few words.

[The Daisy]

Hello Niallgimino. Thank you. Looking forward to your next piece. :)

[Nirego]

I'm working on it! For now though, if you haven't already you might be interested in my poem "Life" - it's a little older like a lot of what I have on here, but is about growing up. I've switched some of my poems around so should probably make a list of what was written when.

[Frieda P]

What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger, and the best place to realize that is in our own solitude & keen understanding....nicely pen'd.

[The Daisy]

Thanks Frieda. :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, you said a lot in so few words. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

" inevitable always persists,
For what cannot tear us, transforms us."
There is a good message you are conveying in this short but powerful write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[The Daisy]

Thank you, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)