Splishy Sploshy Plip Plop!

Summertime is soon and I was thinking about pretty colours and kissing

Little green fish flies up to the sun
In and out of view through white cuddily clouds
'Oh my,' says pure pink luscious lips
Hand moves to cover grinning smile
Quiet footsteps come closer
Down by the waterside
Where baby yellow bees buzz
Past delicate blue dragonflies
Looking for the honey nectar of fruitful flowers
'Oh my,' says pure pink luscious lips
Fingers touch tenderly holding hands
'Plop!,' little green fish comes back
Lands in the sparkling cool wet water
'Oh my,' says pure pink luscious lips
Splishy sploshy sounds
Kiss kiss kissing
In wonderful colourful warm summertime.

Reviews

[Bubo]

Such a fuzzy warm feeling of summer, all those moments when life is good, I just loved the lines
'Oh my,' says pure pink luscious lips ..........wrapped with images of nature produces a nice
underlying erotic feel..............roll on summer!
A really feel good poem Daisy with alot of yummy images!

[youngwriter222]

Such a warm feeling of summer!

"Little green fish flies up to the sun
In and out of view through white cuddily clouds"

All these descriptors of nature makes you want it to be nice and warm out right now.
After reading this it put me in a good mood.
Great poem Sarah

[R J Askew]

Ach, I need some of this having been in a savage mood today writing very brutal things. I notice how you end almost every line with a hopeful, warm, summery word. I feel better for reading this Daisy. Your optimism is like a candle light in the vast darkness of reality. Can I ever feel the way you do? Thankyou for sharing. Tiddles.

[George Love]

Delightful, fun and kind of warm and fuzzy! Since it is quite cold here now, this was a great read!

[Phil Sanders]

What delightfully charming poem .... bright and cheerful ....

[Sandra K]

oooooooo... i cant wait for the summer to be here!!! Im in AZ, so its pretty much summer most of the year, but im still excited. I like your poem. You did a great job!!!

[Molly]

This poem made me happy. :) Especially considering that the weather where I am at the moment consists of varying shades of gray cloud and hail. I like the sound-words too.