World of laziness

Dont be lazy:-D

Laziness forever kills level of hardwork
Just as mysterious person abruptly stood in mid of cardwork
Laziness ruins everyone's life
Just as natural disasters are repulsive rife
Never take off your laziness to extreme height
Just as stars of night sky are beyond our sight

Reviews

[Daisy Macash]

thank you so much for such great compliment:-)

[Sira YR]

Great message for readers put in an elegant way. I enjoyed reading this poem a lot. Great job.