Man IN my dreams.

Man IN my dreams.

A Poem by Daisy
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This poem is about a person I knew a long time ago, That keeps popping in and out of my dreams/head, our time together was brief but apparently I cannot shake him.

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I miss you. 
But how can I miss someone I didn't even know? I don't know. 
You're in my daydreams...and my night ones.. and I still can't figure out why. 
I mean, I knew your name and I knew you were good at drawing, you made me blush and thought I was pretty. 
But we never had a REAL conversation.
I don't know your favorite color, I don't know if you like onions on your philly cheesesteaks. 
I don't know if you love what you do everyday, or if I have ever crossed your mind. Do you ever wonder how i'm doing? 
Am I ever in your daydreams?...or your night time ones? Do you still think I'm pretty? 
Here I am, still missing you, and I still can't figure out why.
      -Daisy  

© 2017 Daisy


Author's Note

Daisy
Ignore the weird format I wrote this exactly how it looks in my notebook, this is my very first poem I am showing to anyone. Please let me know how you guys like it, or don't like it! Thank you! :)

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Great job! I can feel the emotion you are trying convey. The format is interesting but I like it! Hope to see some more.

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Added on September 24, 2017
Last Updated on September 25, 2017
Tags: love, lust, daydreams, dreaming, missing you, relationships, regrets, breakups, happiness

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Daisy
Daisy

Atlanta, GA



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I'm Daisy. I have a lot going on in my head and tend to talk to myself a lot, so I have decided to write out my thoughts into poetry form. i have decided to step out of my comfort zone this week, so h.. more..

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