Love/Sorrow

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I love you so much
Please take good care of my heart
This heart beats for you... <3

Your my only one
Hope you wont take for granted
I am yours always...

Reminds me of you
Is your smile and your sweet LOVE
It haunts me badly...

Happy together
Remember Days I'm with you
I missed it so much...

Tears fall from your eyes
Don't worry two fell from mine
It hurts me so much...

I'm sick of crying
And I am tired of trying 
Smilin' inside dying... 

Reviews

[Rheigniere Martin]

yup.. made a mistake on last part..

[Nameless]

Nature is a must in haikus. One stanzas 5-7-5

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem started with love and needs to be complete. Went to sweet memories and then to sadness. A powerful poem. Love can turn a world to paradise to hell in a few words and actions. A outstanding poem.
Coyote