Greatest Setback

Greatest Setback

A Poem by Daiki
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Something I wrote forever ago. It's pretty apt of growing up.

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I used to think the world was mine,

A beautiful mistake-

To see it all and then to think

It was but mine to take.


Then the world came crashing down,

No beauty in demise;

The world had put me in my place

And claimed me as its prize.

© 2015 Daiki


Author's Note

Daiki
Prior to this, I have never shared my writing. Criticism is welcomed.

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Added on May 23, 2015
Last Updated on May 23, 2015
Tags: poem, pointless, old, whatever