My Flower Girl

One day, the flower girl came to me,

bringing with her a single flower.

And telling me that I am her one and only.

As I took the gracious flower, it began to rain.

Filling the air with many beautiful sents.

I closed my eyes, inhaled deeply and opened them slowly.

Only to see that my flower girl was no longer there.

Yet the flower remained in my hands. I closed my eyes

once again and shed a single tear. Only to wake and

realize that i was dreaming of my far away dear.

Reviews

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I really like this, so sweet and wonderful.

[misha]

This is really sweet and sad too. i enjoyed this poem. Keep up the work!

[Suchita]

This one is nice.. :) well i like the way you write story in the form of poetry...

[Little Abbey]

Very nice poem Dylan. :) Have I read this before? It sounds very familiar.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

i like the emotion! :)