Besos.

Incomplete.

Te echo de menos más que las estrellas se pierda
la noche
cielo
en esta ciudad.
Cada estrella es un beso
que no puedo dar a usted.
Por lo tanto, sin
¿cómo voy a darte un beso?

I miss you more than the stars miss

the night 

sky

in this city.

Each star is a kiss 

that i cannot give to you.

So, without them

how will I kiss you?

Author's Note

direction?

Reviews

[Kruppz]

You have the poet in you. The real poet. I love this one(the english version). I don't understand Spanish.

[Daniel DeLorez]

I really wish that I knew Spanish... Still, the English version is wonderful on its own. Great write. :)

[Crow]

Spectacular write!

I found it much more lovely in spanish, I think the romantic languages offer so much.