Borderlands

soft whispers and urgent tendencies flow across your pillow,

she is all tangled up in your acclamations of love

your pleas and troth keep her bound;

but will she run when you turn away?

you decided this.

Reviews

[Daniel DeLorez]

Short and sweet, just the way I like. :) Absolutely stunning display of emotion and imagery. You're a great writer, if I may say so. :) I look forward to reading more from you.

[Crow]

Another grand work!

I luv the simplicity and truth you portray regarding loss.

[roy mccarthy]

short but well written!
nice write!