The Outlook: A Two Sided Sword

Raindrops falling from a grey clouded sky, impartially soaking pavement, soil, and concrete alike. 

The damp mist masked treetops and roofs from eyes’ sight. 

A bland day in my mind but a day nonetheless. 

The very nature of my existance is to enjoy this day with every fascite of my disposition, the good and ill. 

So, since I be going against my better half not to do so, I choose so with much glea and an outlook in HD.   

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kim's Poems]

quite an intersting piece, I really like this.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Lovely writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

[J.D. Pine]

You're right! I did not realize the errors. Thank for the review

[Nobody.]

I think it's a nice prose poem. the language chosen fits, the descriptions are crisp and clear and it says something. There are a few spelling issues, but nothing spell-check won't clear up. Overall, good poem.
Cheers!
R.G.

[Voice11]

hmm..This was interesting. I liked it but I dont thin its really my style. Good job though

[Fanciful Goddess]

love it! .I love you wordings .
hey lets be friends?! k?

[Jessica]

good job it flows very well. great imagery but i would recomment spacing out the lines rather than bunching it up into a paragraph beacuse it is a very good poemmmm! i liked it alot and i thought it was funny in the end when you said HD

[Akina]

great written. I like the flow in it.
good job, keep it up!

Akina