Sometimes goodbyes aren't so good

To 'Peaches' ....

Sometimes 'goodbyes' aren't so good

I should have said goodbye back when we still could

But I held on deep inside anyway

Now it's time to walk away, yet I'll still say

~~~

Goodbye ... goodbye ... I'm done

Hope it was good for you, hope I was lots of fun

The ride's over now, the show's run it's run

Goodbye, good luck ... I'm done

~~~

You coulda just said what's on your mind

Instead of giving excuses, time after time

In place of the neglecting just outright rejecting would have been just fine

But your story slowly changed to fit the crime

~~~

Goodbye ... goodbye ... I'm done

Hope it was good for you, hope I was lots of fun

The ride's over now, the show's run it's run

Goodbye, good luck ... I'm done

Reviews

[Katie]

I can picture this being a song. It was something about 99% of people go through in life, it was real and although it was sad- it was catchy. I really liked it!

[BABSIE BEE]

I like this....sad but realistic and clever !! Moving on is never easy, but with such wisdom t'will be made a wee bit easier somehow. Thanks for sharing.
Take care
Babsie Bee xx

[Wildfleour]

An excellent piece.