And I Cried

When you wrote with passion

How your heartstrings play

Romance through the eyes of a woman

And I saw it portray

Love spiced with desire

A well tended fire

Burning deep inside

When I found you've been broken

Betrayed in the past

By the one whose token

On your finger failed to last

I felt inside

A crack and I cried

 

Reviews

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I wonder if it really is better to not love at all. At least one does not have to experience the pain, the sadness, the betrayal. However, love is always ready to deal mankind another blow. Maybe the second or 3rd time is the charm? A beautiful, concise write. Your heart poured on parchment. I'm feeling this one right now.

[SallyS29]

Your sorrow continues in words and spirit� is she worth the pain you so clearly are expressing?

A troubled soul can never heal if it still holds on to an unfulfilled desire

Well written my friend

[Anastasia Starlena]

That is such a beautiful piece. In my mind I feel like this. Tomorrow is another day and the sun always shines somewhere. This is an amazing piece. Thank you.