Your Words

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I read your words and they resonate in me
Remind me of my own heart as I pray silently
To find that single kindred soul
The opposite matching piece that makes me whole

But it's just words right now .... just words

I read another and I catch my breath
Wanting to meet you before I meet my death
But life's a complicated mess
Both of us have to deal, I guess

And it's just words right now .... just words

How can I say that it's only words when it seems
That they're a window to your soul, your hopes and your dreams?

I'm touched by the hand that wrote the words I read
Oh how I'd like to feel that touch, for real, it seems
Maybe it's an illusion best not put to the test
But still I think that you are better than the rest

I tell myself it's just words right now .... just words

But I cherish them so
 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. what fierce flow and sadness flowing from the heart.. it's hard to find that perfect compatible mate.. the one whom you feel like is your match but through words alone you do have to be careful.. life is complicated .. it takes alot to find compatibility and then love on top of that! I adore this writing and relate on many levels.. thank you for sharing! =)

[Cherry Berry]

I loved the sentiment in this poem. Well penned. I enjoyed reading it.
xox
Cherri

[BABSIE BEE]

This is awesome !! I'm sooo luvvin it. Cherished words eh ??
Thanking you
BABSX

[Wildfleour]

Great write, Dagonut.

[Carissa]

this is such a great poem. the words seem just like thoughts flowing perfectly from your mind and your heart and onto the paper (or keyboard.) The emotion involved is easily felt and reels you right in. Great piece of work, thanks for sharing.

[John J. Smiley]

It seems to me that, that poem is down right...excellent. Words are the sword of the author and as well the bandage. Nice work, Thanks.

[Gandré]

You write here about a love which was not fullfilled, this is a mark of psychological and perhaps
moral self-sufficiency, or rather of the deficiency, how friendship-love differs from the unconditional love of agape, that's why I say love is absolutely something different than sexual desire. wonderful poem. thanks for your review, too. much appreciated.

[Babbette Francis]

When I first started reviewing, I would cry at all the sad and laugh at all that was funny, and think about what I had read for days. It seemed I could feel everything that was written. I had to stop reading for a long time, so that I could write what was in my own heart and mind. I've learned to quickly move away from my feelings about the others I've just read, but there are times that something stays with me, like it becomes a part of me. Perhaps it always was a part of me and the writing just served to reflect it. I relate to this piece 100%.
Thank you for saying what I could not.

[Brandi Lynn]

I really enjoyed this piece. Especially the flow. And I could really feel the longing in it. It makes me think of online "chat relationships", too. Good work!