Just a passing thought

Smitten me. Namaste

Just a passing thought

Passing and returning

As if once wrought

It echoes in itself a yearning

 

So I guess it's not passing at all

But waiting and biding it's time

For a moment, no matter how small

To bring you back to mind

Reviews

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Yes, the fleeting thought is the most troublesome always showing up unexpectedly disrupting the flow of life; but then again it depends upon the reflection or subject at hand. I thought this was a well-crafted piece, flowing well in rhythm and meter.

[Aspiring Angel]

Why is it that the passing thoughts are always the ones that insist on popping back into our minds

[Seriana]

Awww, how sweet. There goes that wisp of a thought....sigh. Brevity in its finest. Nicely done Dag!