What The Hell Is Wrong With Me?

What The Hell Is Wrong With Me?

A Poem by Poetic Injustice
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Because ... honestly ... I'm feeling lost right now ...

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What The Hell's Wrong With Me?

When it comes to the heart
I fall way too easily
Give it away too readily
What the hell's wrong with me?

When I gather the pieces
Heart bruised, broken, bloody
Has it always been this fragile?
What the hell's wrong with me?

Damn my passion
Damn my misperception
Damn my impulsiveness
What the hell's wrong with me?

In a world filled with
suspicion, omission, deception and deceit
I'm a patsy
What the hell's wrong with me?

And I'll do it all again next week.

What the hell's wrong with me?

© 2008 Poetic Injustice


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Oh my gawd!!! This is so great! .... I think you stole it right out of my mind...!! LOL

I love the way you have expressed -- wearing your heart on your sleeve --. Very creative and nicely done. I think this really struck a chord with me because it is SO me! And yes, why do we repeat these steps over, and over, and over...... ??

Definitely a favorite... thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Oh my gawd!!! This is so great! .... I think you stole it right out of my mind...!! LOL

I love the way you have expressed -- wearing your heart on your sleeve --. Very creative and nicely done. I think this really struck a chord with me because it is SO me! And yes, why do we repeat these steps over, and over, and over...... ??

Definitely a favorite... thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

usually when people overuse something that much its obnoxious.
but i like this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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