My Thoughts

My Thoughts

A Poem by Poetic Injustice
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*sigh*

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My thoughts ...

 

.... drift to you ....

Work requires effort to avoid distraction but in those moments of breathing room ...

... I breathe you ...

... you fill my lungs ....

... you make me light-headed ...

... I am enamored .... amor .....

© 2008 Poetic Injustice


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sigh. i know the feeling.

very nicely done :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sounds like love to me, captured in a few words...but speaking LOUD & CLEAR....nice write . I truly enjoyed this..thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've captured many emotions here in a few words. Thank you for sharing your talent

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very intimate and honest and real...been there done that as well...good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 28, 2008
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